Hi Rebecca! Thanks for the audition - this one and the Iji Family's! haha :) Here are a few thoughts I had while listening. 1. Great changes through delivering the first line. Those six sentences show a thematic shift from Igarashi's annoyance of Takeda to gratitude and eventually affection. It's the whole theme of the entire manga series, summarized into six sentences (not that I expect anyone to know that lol). Without having read the entire thing, you wouldn't know precisely the complicated relationship between these two - but you're definitely hitting in the ballpark! Great script analysis there! 2. Here's something to think about - most of these lines are THOUGHTS. And there needs to be a distinct difference between the words that are spoken from her mouth, and words that are in her brain. YOU, as the voice actor, need to be able to deliver them accordingly, before processing. You'd achieve this by observation and practice. :) 3. I'd go even bigger with the last line - without hurting your voice, of course - looking at the manga pages makes it clear that those bursts are of high, high energy. You're nearly there, but I'd like it to be even bigger in energy (again, without hurting yourself).