Hi The DesiredVoix! Thank you for the audition. Here are a few thoughts while listening to your audition. 1. Level is too low. Adjust the gain so that your peaks are hitting around -6dbs - that's a good rule of thumb to follow for these auditions. :) 2. The character is an older gentleman - I'd expect a slightly slower speech, a sense of experience in his voice, and definitely an air of superiority. Not from a braggart or a jerk, but of experience, status, and knowledge, you know? I'd need more of that sense in the performance.