Hi TsuChibi_Castle! Thank you for auditioning! It's clear that you've acted before and you know how to take written directions into your voice acting - that's a big plus! :) Here are a few thoughts I had while listening to your audition: 1. Your recording level is way too low. I'd recommend that you set a gain level for a conversational delivery and another level for the louder stuff. Either way, we want your peaks to be hitting *around* -6 dbs before normalizing. 2. I really liked the transition from annoyance to gratitude with a dose of tsundere in your first take. That's the right direction you're heading in. 3. The voice sounds a bit too CHIBI - I understand that's your niche (username and all), but I'm looking for a BIT more maturity. Igarashi is an interesting balance between a dollop of innocence and "chibi-ness" and a mature 20-something working woman. ---- I'd highly recommend that you try to get as close as you can to the Japanese voice in the dub video I linked and try to give the same amount of crass, innocence, sweet, yet aggressive tonality that makes her so unique. :)
Thanks for all the feedback, Kvoice! As soon as I get back to my home studio I'll send in a new audio for ya!