Hi AC9123! Here's a couple of thoughts I had while listening to your audition. 1. Most of the audition is a thought and your voice needs to reflect that. How would the words she says from her mouth differ in delivery than the words in her brain? We'll need to hear that distinction before audio processing goes into work. 2. I was looking for youth, but at the same time, a level of maturity. In her mid 20s, and as an employed woman in Japan, she would have a little bit of both. There's a lot of youth in your voice, and need more of the maturity. I hope these comments make sense.! :)
Okay, thanks for the feedback! I'll resubmit another audition with this in mind.