Thanks for the second audition! Your acting and delivery is there - just the voice isn't quite fitting with my imagination haha! It's certainly closer to the delivery I'm looking for than the first take, though!
I'm sorry then, I don't think I can provide that reliable of a middle-aged boss voice without it sounding a little phony. Still, I wish you the best of luck with the project and finding the appropriate voice! I'll try to keep an eye out for any other future auditions.
No need to apologize! :) We all have different voices and cannot fit all roles! Thank you for your time, Joseph! Good luck in your venture!