Hi Gemudon! Thank you for auditioning. Here's some feedback. -- 1. Your audio needs to be louder. I'd recommend you experiment more with your gain settings to really dial in the levels. Plenty of resources out there for this. -- 2. More importantly, this is not the right role for you. Knowing which role you'd be suited for is a large portion of this trade. You know your voice - it sits in the young adult male realm. Take a look at the character - he's clearly someone who is much older than your voice. I applaud your efforts in auditioning, but amidst the actual "more experienced" voice actors here (i.e. older), the role is more likely to go to one of them.