Maverick: A Halo Machinima (2nd Casting Call)
jay deering for Hawkins
Hawkins is the commander of this bootleg group. He is generally in a terrible mood and takes his anger and frustration out on the brothers by sending them on missions and reaping the majority of the rewards. He can be very whiny at times.
He should have a deep, smooth voice that comes off well as angry and intimidating. Yet sometimes whiney as seen in audition line 4.
I listed the role as a Young Adult but he is somewhere in between that and Middle Aged. In any case, he should sound older than the brothers.
1. So we take them out! Get rid of the problem completely.
2. What is it Jay? I’ve got some important issues to deal with…
3. Can someone get Michael on a line?
4. Seriously! This cereal is not going to milk itself!
How's this, give me the direction your looking for, If I'm close.
Tone was great, dont embelish 'completely' so much, transition from trying to sound in charge with the "what is it jay" line to the "can someone get michael" line, sound a little bit whiny with the cereal/milk line. Like a spoiled prince who gets his way and is angry when he doesn't :) Hope this helps!
Sorry should clarify with the transition from jay to michael comment, sound like youre attempting to sound in charge with the Jay line to sounding like youre impatient and frustrated that you still havnt had anyone get you a call to Michael yet. Hope that clarifies!
Ok I adjusted all but the one line of (what is it Jay) tell me if I'm close or did I really miss the mark haha,,