The Fisherman and His Wife
Ramyun for The Fisherman's Wife (Dame Ilsabil)
The Fisherman's Wife, Dame Ilsabil, is one of the three main characters in the story. She is characterized as a woman continually unsatisfied with what she has, always coveting more, and over the course of the story becomes blinded by greed and power.
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American and UK accents preferred. There are 30 short lines of dialogue amounting to about 550 words or so.
“Ah,” said the woman, “it is surely hard to have to live always in this dirty hovel. You might have wished for a small cottage for us. Go back and call him. Tell him we want to have a small cottage. He will certainly give us that.”
“Get up husband, and just peep out of the window. Look! Couldn’t we be the king over all that land? Go to the Flounder, and we will be the King.”
“What!” said the woman, “I am the King, and you are nothing but my husband. Will you go this moment? Go at once! If he can make me a King, he can make me an Emperor. I will be Emperor. Go now.”
Thank you for your audition. As far as feedback goes, the delivery of the lines (especially at the beginning) could use a bit more expression. She is trying to persuade her husband to do something after all, and is excited by greed at the prospect of getting better things. Technically speaking, there is noticeable reverb in your audio. Thank you again for your audition.
Thank you for your feedback. I know that my voice acting is not at the top, I'm only a beginner and you are one of the few people who really gave me feedback. You are right when you say that it can use a bit more expression, I tried, but it wasn't the best shot at it. Like I said before, I had two different approaches in another file, but I couldn't upload it so I went with a mix of both. On the reverb part, I'm still trying to figure it out how to edit my files so they can be as clean as possible. Thank you again.