Thanks for the audition! You've got the voice down pretty well, the only suggestion to really give is that the lines should be delivered a little differently. Lulu's words are all spoken slowly, very carefully, and pronouncing each syllable or sound and not slurring them together like someone talking normally might, if that makes sense. For example, when you said "sorceress", you pronounced it more like "source-ress" whereas Lulu would likely say the full word like "source-er-ess". Listen to her lines if that didn't make any sense and you'll probably see what I mean. She speaks slowly and clearly. If you'd like to try again with that in mind you're welcome to!