It's not bad (I mean, your voice is always nice), and you did creep very well, but I think I'm having a hard time pinpointing what isn't fitting well (I'm think it's the inflections or the mellowness).
Voice Actor
(Finnish not Dutch)
boisterous, loud, very involved with getting his hands dirty
Aave is an immortal that currently resides in America and recently began living as a serial killer in private whilst being a surgeon to the public.
(sickeningly flirty) “Well hello there, sweet precious."
"At last, I can make you mine!"
(annoyed) "Nothing YOU need to be concerned about."
(trying to make someone else jealous) "Calm down. She's alright. In fact, she's MORE than alright. Mmm. The way she so willingly gave herself to me last night, and how good she was, you'd forget she's practically a virgin."
(endearingly) "Hope you're hungry~ It's good for you to eat to be healthy and strong, Little Missy. You're gonna need to be for the fun before us. Our future together."
"Of course, whatever makes you comfortable, my love."
