I think you have a very nice voice with a lot of potential! If you could find some time to submit another audition to this role I'd like to give you some hopefully helpful insight on this line. This character gives off a, That friend that always gets dragged into his friends unplanned nonsense kind of vibe. So he needs to sound like this sort of thing happens a bit too often and hes lecturing his friend again for doing something thoughtlessly. I hope that makes sense! Please do get back to me when you can! And thank you for your interest in the role!