Star Wars: Republic - Outlander (Comic Dub)
DianaL for The Dark Woman
The mysterious Jedi Master known only as the Dark Woman is mistrusted by at least as many Jedi as she is on good terms with. She speaks in riddles and is plagued by self-doubts for reasons that will be explored further down the line.
A pleasant night, Jedi. Is it not? Do you have time to visit with an old friend before you leave, Ki? Ah, wait! Forgive me, Jedi. Perhaps I should call you "Master Ki" now?
Ah, Coruscant. Hub of the galactic core. The scintillant Planet. Beautiful, tempting Coruscant. You truly hate this place, don't you, Ki-Adi Mundi!
Wait, Ki! It's no coincidence that I'm here! I must warn you of something! I've had dreams! Great dangers await you - dangers that whisper of the dark side! Within the deserts of another's heart, your life will be changed forever! Listen to the force! Let it guide your every step and thought! Beware on this world to which you go, Ki-Adi Mundi! Beware!
I really like the voice, but I wasn't too sold on the delivery at the first part. It sounds better near the end, though!
Gotcha! Thank you for the feedback! If you don't mind, I would like to redo it. Would that be ok?
Better than okay, It would be most appreciated! I'm exited to hear it! (By the way, Ki-Adi Mundi is pronounced without that pause you put in there, just a heads up)
Awesome! Thank you! I am excited to redo it and with the changes in mind! :)