Thanks for this one. You really have to change something with your equipment, It's heavy noisy, On other of your auditions I've heard too. If your using a PC, sometimes it can help to plug the micro in a different socket (front / back). Part 0 I like more vigorous (I'll change the description). The rest sounds good. Overall the voice is too young for this role. Thanks again.

I am using my laptop I actually have a really good professional sound system on my pc that doesn't have any funny sounds -- I have to connect it to my laptop though because the microphone picks up every noise in my house -- its that good. I have been trying to play around with it again - I am a bit rusty. Thanks.