You've got a good sounding voice but a very tinny sound and a bit of echo. It may be because you're too close to your mic, the quality of your mic, or inadequate sound dampening. You might try recording under a blanket, making a cardboard box to set your mic in *through the top if it is suspended or in the middle if it is a USB desk mic*, and try moving a little back. It could also be the gain, which is just some adjustments either in your recording program, on the mic itself, or in the mic settings on your computer.