Fire Emblem Echoes: Ciphers of Valentia Ch. 0 Prologue Alm & Celica
DragonMiracles for Grey (Kid)
Voice Type: Moderate to Moderately High, Friendly, Snarky, Down-to-Earth, Playful
Reference Clip: https://vocaroo.com/i/s1UQ7WK8TAKY
Bio: One of Alm’s friends at Ram Village who is often quick with a joke and is a rather down-to-earth fella. However Gray is also a bit of a realist so he might show a more cynical side to him but he will have your back in a pinch. He also has a “Those Two Guys” dynamic with Tobin.
1. (Calm but slightly annoyed) Faye, are you looking for Alm again?
2. (Highly amused at Kliff’s expense) Oh gods, Kliff as the baby boy oh that is rich…3. (Very Snarky & amused to slightly surprised.) Uh-oh looks like someone is thinking hard, hey Faye you might want to change his diaper if things get too stinky. Speaking of which hey Kliff blink twice if Faye has ever made you wear a diaper recently. *Kliff does blink twice* Whoa really? Kliff I… I was just kidding.
4. (Trying to be rational.) Yeah guys usually when someone other than Sir Mycen shows up its just some traveler or some peddler so I’m sure it would be fine.5. (Calm to Shocked & Amazed) Okay guys I think we should be finding our visitors right about… What the?! Okay I did not see this coming; well these guys are definitely not peddlers.
6. (Nervous to trying to sound civil) Kliff are you trying to get us in trouble here? Uhh… what I mean is… heh heh eh please don’t mind my friend’s little display of rudeness here. We normally don’t get visitors of your prestige & caliber here in quaint little Ram Village.
+ Voice is okay (but a little effeminate) but your delivery on the last two lines were pretty good. - Though your delivery on most of the lines were okay but your take on Line 2 was a bit lacking in energy. Still this was alright.
Thank you for the feedback. I hope to give this another shot using the feedback given.
Oh yes if you like you can try again here, sorry for not saying this sooner but I was a bit busy trying to stay caught up on critiquing other auditions.