I know I'm probably not the person you wanted a critique from, but I had to tell you two things: first, don't record when your parents are asleep and you know you can't make noise. It's that simple. Find a secluded spot (like a closet) and drape something fabric-related around you to absorb the sound and give a clear recording. If there's ever a moment where no one else is home, record then. Second, I listened to your other audition, and it's clear you couldn't grasp how the character is supposed to sound. She's a very pushy, loud, energetic kind of character, and instead you sound mousy. That kind of voice would've been perfect for Rei Ayanami instead.