The Fire Master: Dr. Flame [R-Rated Superhero Audio-Play Series]
JadendayZero for Tony Esmeralda Rico
[Excited]:
I can't believe it... The USA, the land of opportunity and freedom and an overwhelming love for Avocados for some reason. The work that I do here will finally make a difference. It'll be hard at first... but I know that with enough hard work and determination I'll be a great hero! I believe it! There he is... Dr. Flame saving me from a villain! I can't wait to finally prove myself as a good side kick for-
[Hears Dr. Flame scold him and Tony is deflated]:
Aaaaand dreams crushed.[Scared to somewhat doubtful of himself]:
Uhh...Guys?! Do you think we're under-prepared for this?! I-I-I Have hopes, dreams, a future wife in mind....other failures.[Bashfulness]
I'm dancing with my dream-girl Angelina. Everything coming up for "Tony Esmer--
[Clears throat to avoid his middle name]
Rico"!
I like the adlibbing and attitude. My complaints would be in how much the audio seems to be peaking around quite a bit.
ah ok thanks for the feedback