Pokemon Platinum: Video Game Voice Acting
jastme for Saturn
"The mission is proceeding without a hitch. The boss should be pleased. Everything is for everyone, and for the good of Team Galactic!"
"Gah! Even I, a Commander, only managed to buy us time? But that's fine. A child like you will never be able to stem the flow of time!"
"...Gah! What makes you so tough? Fine... Do whatever you want with those three Pokémon. Press the button on that machine to set them free."
Add some more emotion, honest opinion it just felt like you were reading.
That seems fair, I was honestly very focused on getting the tone of voice right >_< My bad
You're alright the tone and everything else was pretty close we just need that emotion nailed down.
Of course, when I get back from uni I'll run it through a couple more times and see how it sounds! Thanks for the feedback :D
Hey again! Just posted up the new take at it, I hope this is more what you're after?