The Fire Master: Dr. Flame [R-Rated Superhero Audio-Play Series]
kegarza1990 for Oceana
One of the major villains in Dr. Flame and possessed water-based powers.
Oceana is a Brash, Cocky, Wise-crackling, Lewd, flirty and a total troll. she loves to make scathing jokes about society which she usually mistakes for “social satire”. Makes bad puns based on whatever she does to her enemies after defeating them. She also goes around, always flirting with whatever attractive person that caught her eye.
On her downtime she comes off very moody, blaming the world being hypocritical on how everyone cares, and how good morals dominate the world. But all it takes is cheap drama to really gain attention and power. Which implies bad upbringing but she’ll be confident in who she is: A Dominant Sadist.
For her vocals, she has a flirty, condescending and medium-pitch voice. Which can drop from being seemingly sweet to cold and sadistic. Her Accent can either be New Jersey or Valley Girl.
(Cackles gently, gradually humming into her first word; “Oooh”s sound flirtatious):
Hahaha---Ooohh… No, no, no…! This simply won’t do! I thought I would have a little more fun.. You know.. Just a trivial flooding of a neighborhood, drown a few people, listen to the choir of screams until that satisfying silence…. theeeeen be on my merry way! Nothing too nefarious, really! But, noooooooo..! Just like your pathetic society in general---You two would have to come along with the intention of simply ruining all of my fun!
(Chuckles malevolently to herself):
Okay… well maybe not all of the fun. I mean, after all, I do have you two to play around with! Eh heeeheeeh~!(Amused) :
Ooohoohoo...? Did I touch a nerve, puddy tat? Are you two close, perhaps? Trying to protect your ‘man’? Hehehe~As a fellow predator of the wild, you should know what it’s like making your prey fully aware of the situation that they’re in.
(Lowly and sinisterly implying):
So that anytime that I so choose, when I’m done playing with my toys, I can end it in an instant.
There’s seems to be no "bounce" [or energy] to your audition. Based on what I'm hearing, it sounds like you're just reading out the lines instead of just acting it out. Thus lacking any energy and being compelling. Also when you're doing the more louder lines, You should be slightly further away from the mic. Speaking of the Mic, I suggest using compressor to raise the volume of the mic since the original recording was hard to hear. I had to heavily edit your audio myself to properly review your audition. Thank you for auditioning, I am looking forward on your redo.
Agreed, also I don't know if you could've helped it, but we did have to boost your audio separately because your take was really quite. It might have to do with the type of file or an error with the audio. Just thought it might be something to look into.