The Fire Master: Dr. Flame [R-Rated Superhero Audio-Play Series]
Merry_Ryan for Blitz-Man
The 3rd Generation son of an old school super-villain, Blitz-Man is a overly inflated and egotistical foe of Dr. Flame. He's the self-proclaimed "The Definition of Perfection".
Always mouthing off his various foe [Usually other heroes, detractors and critics] online. Tends to make promotional speeches on how much he is better than you. But tend to be quite irked if anyone forgets who he is or if someone messes with his dashing good looks [Even from lipstick]. He tends to fly into a blinding rage able to rant and pummel his opponents. It makes him dangerous but sloppy.
His voice has a mid-to-deep pitch flamboyant voice. Speaks in a cocky and Jock manner, but gets whinny whenever his looks get damaged or humiliated.
Gentlemen, there are many things one is capable of. Perfection is the only job I am qualified for.
How DARE YOU RUINED MY FACE! Do you know how much time and effort it takes to look as good as this?! I'll make you pay by striking that ugly mug of yours 10x over!
Voilà ! I call that my 10-Stars Dropkick. Jealous?
You have to act the line, not read it. Please make sure that you read it over a few times and let yourself feel the character. Loosen up and try to really become the character. Just because you're using a jock drawl doesn't mean you're bring the character to life.
To be fairly honest, I haven't really had training in voice acting, so my performances are not ones of a professional. Though, I am willing to try again with the advice you gave me, if you're willing to allow me to post another audition?
The best way to do that is by being observant of others and act naturally or looking at how others portray people.