Your voice is awesome! Could you try to record that with a little les backround noise? Some tips you could try is get a cardboard box set it sideways, and put your phone in there and try to talk in the cardboard box. it sonds weird but it does work. You can do the same thing with a cupboard, just empty it out , set you phone in ther and talk in the cupboard it really cancels out the background noise. Thank you for your audition!