******* Beasts
MrPokemaniac3 for Doctor John Hewson
Doctor John Hewson is a scientist, and adopted May after the Experiment Incident.
Audio must be very clean and have a good microphone without too much room noise.
Feel free to audition and I will give feedback if interested!
*Talking to Recorder* [Clears throat] “This is Doctor John Hewson, August 12th, 2089. I am here with Miss May Hewson, regarding Case 38DM.”
*Firm* “Miss Hewson, you know the reason why the walls are built so high and why no-one must leave.”
*Surprised* “Impossible! You…”
Would like to say thank you for auditioning! Sorry for the late response, I wasn't really getting any traffic flow into this Project and I wasn't updated through my e-mail. I'll definitely give you some feedback! First 2 scripts. I am not sure if this is how you normally speak or because you're recording. but you sound kind of breathy when there is a comma or punctuation. Relax more when talking, don't rush too much of trying to get the words out. Also speak with more confidence or like you ARE confident and you are just doing a routine evaluation. You can do One Breath : "This is Doctor John Hewson, August 12th, 2089" 2nd breath : "I am here with Miss May Hewson, regarding Case 38DM". for the commas, just pause for half a second, dont think too much about it,. 2nd line, (firm) Needs more authority in a way that you are explaining to her that you've said this before. How many times do you have to tell her? kind of example Try to find where the sentences require breath at a natural time. like before (and) Surprised! I understand its hard :) Even I have trouble HAHA! Thank you for your audition! I was really happy to be able to hear it and I enjoyed listening to it! I hope the feedback helps you a bit!
Thank you for the feedback! yeah this is one of my first times trying out voice acting, and my voice is naturally a higher tone, so dropping it down lower kinda takes a bit of concentration, so my lines don't come out as fluently. If you'd like, I could try it again with your advice in mind, or do you already have someone else in mind for the part?
At the moment, I do not have the required voice actors for the scene. You're free to try again with my advice in mind if you have free time and want me to give you feedback. I definitely am curious on how you would voice it knowing what you know now. I say use your natural tone voice or something to your comfort. Your voice resembles Jesse Eisenberg from The Social Network. Check out the Hacking Scene - The Social Network. I could imagine you voicing it in that manner, NOT THAT FAST, but with the attitude of confidence and you know what you are doing.