The Spectre: Protector of Memphis
Leara Nicole Morris-Clark for Tara Trent
A Cool confident smart teen girl, but with a soft friendly side, though can be flirty when joking around.
Tara Trent is James Jordan's Best Friend and Partner in Crime-fighting. She comes off as cool and somewhat arrogant but is as nice and caring of a friend James can ask for.
More info of her character in the character profile section
http://www.mediafire.com/view/q2o86z7jd1fz04n/The_Spectre_Story_Notes_4_(Character_Profiles_Mad_Rabbit_and_Henchmen_update).rtf
Heyoooo Jimmy! How's The Big Time Superhero life coming along?
(Narrating in First Person): James. As in, James Jordan. And The Spectre. You could say they’re different people. I know that he says that. But I know better. I know because I know both of them. They’re only different in looks. It’s the same boy under that mask. He’ll always be James to me.
(Sarcastic and Flirty tone): My dear James, would I lie to you?
So far the voice is alright but to me it lacks a nice natural flow the way you read out the lines. Again you got the voice, you just need to A. read it more naturally and B. Give it a bit more emotion. That is all. I'll give you a second chance at it. ^^
Is it just the 2nd line that needs work or all of them?
all of them.
Could you tell me what kind of emotion you want from each line? like is she being sarcastic or playful or serious in the first line? And what feel are we going for in the second line?
line 1: Very Casual and upbeat line 2: Do whatever you think best fits her mood when she narrates. Pretty much improv an emotion. line 3: Being Sarcastic and Flirty.
Okay, thanks. I'll give it another shot tonight after work.
alright. no problem.
Okay, resubmitted. That's all I got. Thanks!