Your Letter [WebToon]
Demorealist for Sori Lee
She's a main character to the story and a lot of lines in episode one.
"A special young girl - kind, caring and principled well beyond her years." - Description from Summary
Please read the full storyline to understand.
*Narrating* Two days. That was all it took to get everyone against me.
*Over the call, shock* ....Oh, I see. (Pause for Julie to talk) No, there's nothing feel sorry about.
*Narrating and crying* Where did it all go wrong? I thought everything would be okay once I moved to another school.
Always appreciate feedback!
Done well! But the way it was said wasn't up to expectations. Can you redo the over call line?
Of course! I will do it as soon as possible! Can I have a little more direction of how to do it different, please? :3 thank you for your feedback!
Alright so, Sori just found out that her only friend at school was transferring school. So she was silence for a moment. Then she said she first dialogue. Then pauses for Juile to speak, which I suppose she apologizes, and then Sori say her second dialogue. Not the second line but the dialogue. Does that make sense or is it confusing? I highly recommend you read episode one on WebToon to get a better image.