Drunks and Fanatics, Episode 3 - The Demon and the Flame
SolacedVoices for Bishop Korlos
Bishop Korlos is a the most overconfident but also most loyal follower of the cultists and idolizes the Archbishop. Mostly being carefree and leaving the others to do his work for him, Bishop Korlos prefers to lounge around more than anything. However, when it matters most, Korlos is known to be a very capable fighter and conjurer. Using a combination of conjuration magic and swordsmanship, he takes down his enemies as quickly and efficiently as possible. Not wanting to use more than necessary so he can recline all the sooner.
"So what? They're probably just sneaking around unaware of the fact that we can see them."
- Overconfident and dismissive.
"Then how about we send the Inquisitors? I'm sure they can handle the capture with ease."
- Believes that the easiest solution is to send the elite guard against an unknown force that just killed off 37 soldiers with ease.
It's not bad, but you kind of went from slight arrogance to German towards the end. Also, I'd recommend putting clearer divisions between lines. Otherwise it sounds rushed. It's not bad, but for Korlos you need to sound very arrogant and above others. Kicking back and letting those beneath you do all the work while you take a nap. Hope the feedback helps and we listen to every audition.