Fire Emblem: Affinities (Remaining cast)
YoungHylianLad for Atticus
Name: Atticus
Class: Sniper, Tactician
Likes: Solitude, sleeping, bow tuning
Appearance: Wavy, cowlicked hair. As a slim man, the Ylissean uniform often appears to be too loose for him. Atticus wears a hip quiver, a finger tab, an arm guard, and a pair of black boots.
Atticus is the second-in-command of the Ylissean camp and Riza’s right-hand man. Alongside being an experienced archer, his intelligence and intuition have rightfully earned him the role of the camp’s tactician. May also be narcoleptic, but has yet to be diagnosed.
(Yawning) It's afternoon already? But I only fell asleep for a few minutes...
You... You interrupted my precious slumber. And for that, you will pay.
Only shoot with an arrow nocked! Don't dry-fire or else you'll risk damage to the bow, and most importantly, yourself.
These are solid takes. The only thing I have to say is that last part of line 2 sounds rushed for a warning.
Thank you! And honestly I did that on purpose to almost indicate a sense of urgency? But probably not the right scenario for that
The overall pacing is good (for the reason you mentioned), but I mean just before the word "yourself". A pause would emphasize caution. Regardless, it was a pleasure listening to your audition!
Ah thank you, and for the feedback too!