Strong read, great character in here. Very good cold reading skill here, there were almost no mistakes in the read apart from a few instances where your pacing caused you a little bit of issue. You break up the lines quite nicely in digestible segments that you handle very well, great skill to continue to build.

Getting back to pacing I want you to take your time. Each step in the read it was almost like you were racing to the end! Let the script breath, let yourself slow down and find a more relaxed rhythm, you almost sounded tense at the speed you were going. Not only that, but you sometimes dropped words because of your speed. Looking at "come (on) in. Come (on) in". You also had a few instances where you would cut the end off a word or slur/mumble another word.

You have a nice natural power to your voice, a strength you can hear in the read. That said I think you can go further. I feel like you're at a 6/10 in volume and I wanna really hear you push it more! We wanna fill a full gym with your voice and the script! Big full body of air driven out to the room with your diaphragm! Related to but different to your projection, you had strong energy at the top of each section of the read that would slowly diminish as you read. For something kike this read I wanna hear that energy and momentum carry all the way through the whole script! Lie running a race, you don't wanna burn all the energy at the start and slow down over time, you wanna pace the energy so it's strong the whole race! Even sprinting through the end of the race!

Great job catching entrée instead of entry, that gets everyone. In fact I'm pretty sure that's only there to act as a gotcha for people doing cold reads. It's how I can tell that your pacing is throwing off your read a bit. Great strong read here and a brilliant launch to the start of our classes together!