Great projection and pace!

You have a nice, friendly tone, which works well for the read! However, to enhance your performance, focus on projecting your voice more. Imagine you're trying to reach someone across a large gym without a microphone—this means you need to really push your voice out using your diaphragm. This will help you be heard clearly and prevent the voice from coming off too soft.

Also, be mindful of taking deep breaths and managing your airflow throughout the performance. It’s important to maintain clarity and avoid running out of air, which can lead to mumbling or loss of articulation. Practice techniques like “doggy pants” to build up your lung capacity and control. With more practice and attention to these details, your performance will become even stronger! Keep up the great work!