A Cold And Heartless Lullaby *PAID* (Sci-fi Audiobook) Round 2
mitztnt for Cheat
Cheat is an enigma. To those that don't know her, she looks like she might be insane. She's cracked, but she likes it that way. Even while probably being a head shorter than everyone in the room, she still intimidates everyone. She demands attention at any cost, fear for a little extra. Once a perfect child, now a psycho criminal she will accomplish anything she sets out to do. It's impossible to tell what she is thinking at any point and if you cross her... well... It's best not to think about it.
~400 Words
(In casual conversation)
“I’m still figuring that out… Do you think you could fit inside an andron? You are obscenely skinny right?”
(Excitedly)
“Holy Gods of Waylight break! Scam, Did that andron just speak?”
(Purposefully overdramatic)
“Well, I guess he doesn’t care about unimaginable wealth, *Dramatic sigh* Oh well… I guess we will have to kick him till he falls to pieces and use his parts for scrap. Drop him Brute.”
(overconfidently agreeing)
“Yeah, I’m the best.”
(Interrupting)
“NOPE! Sorry pal but I have to warn you, we don’t use real names around here. The circle of trust only goes so deep.”
*Slightly manic laughter*
“I like this guy! He asks the right questions, let me paint you a picture. Imagine never moving another muscle again for the rest of your life because you have hired servants to do it for you. That’s one servant for every muscle, and there is like a million of those!”
I really like your delivery, though it seems like the audio keeps...glitching? All the portions with silence seem to have been removed, even where silence is natural within the line delivery. If you are using an automated tool to remove silence or otherwise process your audio, take a look and see if that is causing it. Also, your recording is very quiet, so try turning up the gain on your microphone to make your voice more audible.
Thank you so much I'll definitely work on that