The Marla Saga - fantasy/adventure Audiobook Series
Zepharys for Barsol Carissime
Book 3
The middle brother of the Carissime siblings, he is very pompous and full of himself. I’d prefer if someone can sing, as he does have a small number. He likes gambling, girls, and getting into trouble. He doesn’t respect boundaries very well. He also likes to be overdramatic.
Barsol is supposed to have a more baritone voice. Deep and sultry.
“How insulting! Can’t a man just want to enjoy the company of his brothers?”
“I am sorry that I am a slave to beauty! I just knew that with such exquisiteness in our presence, it would need the attention of one more worthy.”
“Enchanté dollies. I am the more charming brother Barsol.”
“Well, fine then. I’ll just sit here in pain. The pain that YOU caused me. You know this means that you owe me. In fact, all of you do since you did nothing as he battered me out of my mind.”
(narration) “I could tell that he thought himself much above me. And while he was disgusted by everything, I could tell that he was especially disgusted by me (which of course, he had no right to be, he is a sadist who gets off on hurting and destroying others in the most cruel and gruesome ways I had ever heard). He let out a growl-like noise as he made a gesture to a servant behind me. The servant moved closer, but neither said nor did anything.”
“Are you coming along or not? I, for one, do not want to stay in this horrible little dungeon, let alone die in it.”
First of, really love your voice! All of your auditions were pretty good, you definitely have a voice for narration. Barsol was not bad, but it could use more drama/energy as he's a very flamboyant and expressive person (he's acting like he's always on the stage). Criston was also very good, though I'd be curious to hear you do a more normal version of the voice. You might have a good voice for Coal or Boothrey, if you'd like to check them out too. I do like what you have, so if you want to check out anyone else or my other projects, I'd love to hear more from you! Thank you for your audition, by the way! Also, if you haven't already and would like to check out my server, it's in the project description.
Hey! Thanks a load for the feedback. I’ll definitely have a shot at the characters you mentioned, and I’ll see if I can improve my Barsol.