The Marla Saga - fantasy/adventure Audiobook Series
sekilm for Fafalor
BOOK 1-3
He’s a humanoid monster with a feathery look that tries to kidnap Marla under Criston’s demand. He can get a lot snippy and snide, sort of has a piss poor attitude, like a cocky teenager. He is described to have a voice "as sweet as honey," though at the same time, it's very devoid of any tenderness or kindness.
“I’m Fafalor. My quiet acquaintance over here is Malsom. You’re coming with us.”
“Because if you don’t, my dear co-worker will chase you down. He’s a Hunter.”
“You’re going to have to figure that one out for yourself.”
(pouty) “Don’t be boring.”
“Look, it’s now or never. The portal is going to close up for good tomorrow, not sure exactly when, but it’s going to be tomorrow, whether it be morning or night, it’s not going to be to long that you can enter Utridesma.”
“Dear Three, no. I hate how people often compare US to the likes of THEM. They think there is no difference but we are nowhere near to being the same creatures. It’s insulting.”
“Now, now Malsom. Don’t doubt my powers of temptation. We will go back in the morning and see if she’s changed her mind then.”
Out of all your auditions, I think Fafalor was the closest. Though my biggest critiques would be that it's OK to slow things down and take your time as well as to try sounding a little more natural as it does sound more like you're reading. If you want to check out anyone else or my other projects, I'd love to hear more from you! Thank you for your auditions, by the way! Also, if you haven't already and would like to check out my server, it's in the project description.
Thank you for your feedback! I'll make sure to check out your other projects and also get better.