The Marla Saga - fantasy/adventure Audiobook Series
scuffeddotexe for Darleané
BOOK 1-3
Darleané can sound anywhere between young adult and middle adult.
Tough as nails, but with a heart of gold. She is a monster with quite an amalgamation of looks going on with her body. She comforts Marla when she was crying and has a motherly or big sisterly feeling toward the young girl. She’s very insecure about the way she looks.
“Why are you crying?”
“I’m curious. I also hate to see a beautiful, young girl cry, it’s a terrible crime to make one cry.”
“That’s not right. They should have asked if something was wrong, you’re obviously upset.”
(sadly nostalgic) “It was a very long time ago. He grew up and never came back. Last time I saw him, I think he was fourteen.”
“Take a deep breath. Let it out when it’s ready.”
(reassuring/comforting) “Marla, no. Sh. There’s nothing wrong with you. You were doing something nice and great. Appreciation is a virtue. It’s better to be filled with virtues than vices. Those children were being so cruel to you. That was wrong of them.”
“RUN!”
(gasp) “If that’s the case it’s worse than I thought!”
(frantic) “Javis! I think Marla’s heart broke!”
(angry) “Stop! How could YOU?! She cared about YOU! She adored and believed in YOU! She trusted YOU! And YOU did this to her!”
You have a nice voice, though I don't know if I'd describe it as deep and I don't know if it matches for Darleané. I tend to imagine her with a bit more of a mature, almost motherly tone, as well I do think a deeper voice would be good for her. I do like what you have, so if you want to check out anyone else or my other projects, I'd love to hear more from you! Thank you for your audition, by the way! Also, if you'd like to check out my server, it's in the project description.
Thanks for your feedback, I admit when auditioning i didn’t feel like I fit the book for her, but I love what you are doing with the character. I’ll look at your other work. Thanks for the feedback, it’s rare to get any these days.