Hey overall a very good sound and an interesting take. But as a metal vocalist I am slightly concerned that your technique for those sound like they're heavy inhales (in screaming we call these inhale screams and they're generally discouraged as there's no truly safe way to do them and they don't project too well). If done without proper use of the throat and diaphragm that can lead to serious long term damage. Just be careful if you're unfamiliar with the techniques as they can do harm. Although at your voices level it doesn't sound projected enough to harm you too much. Best of luck though. It was quite a cool take on it☺️